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The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. 　　Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons 　　where relevant.

The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. 　　Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons 　　where relevant.
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Nowadays
the
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electricity
 is closer to our
life
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lives
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. let me write something
how
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about how
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 geothermal energy is used to produce
electricity
 first,the cold water
pumped
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was pumped
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 down
in
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appropriately 4.5km
a
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d
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and
 the injection was well.
Second,
the injection ac crossed the Geothermal zone which is full of hot rocks.
Third,
the production we all down and the hot water
pumed
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pumped
 up
in appropriately
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 4.5km. Fourth,it became the condenser in the land. Because of the hot water, the condenser con
senders
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 ed more and more
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to
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steam and
it
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flow
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 in the range of
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the sky
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sky
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, At
last
, the condenser
powered
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 by steam for ah or t time and
its u
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 rounded the stripe for
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too
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to
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 many
cycle
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. By a series change, it
powered
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 by turbine and produces
electricity
. It transports to everywhere through
he
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 high tower. operating it instantly can produce more and more
electricity
 f to our daily
life
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Basic structure: Add more body paragraphs.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Basic structure: Write more paragraphs.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 1 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • geothermal energy
  • renewable source
  • sustainable
  • drilling wells
  • hot water and steam
  • drive turbines
  • generate electricity
  • conversion
  • cooling process
  • re-injected
  • efficiency
  • environmental impact
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