The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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electricity
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about how
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and
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the injection ac crossed the Geothermal zone which is full of hot rocks. Third,
the production we all down and the hot water pumed
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pumped
in appropriately
4.5km. Fourth,it became the condenser in the land. Because of the hot water, the condenser con Correct your spelling
inappropriately
senders
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sends
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flows
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