The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The pie charts illustrate the hotel customer
service's
Change noun form
service
rate
from 100 customer
in Parkway Hotel in 2005 and 2010.
Based on the chart, it could be seen that there were Change to a plural noun
customers
drastically
changes in the proportion of each Change the adverb
drastic
value
. There were several value
that Change to a plural noun
values
increasing
and several Wrong verb form
increased
value
that Fix the agreement mistake
values
decreasing
. The Wrong verb form
decreased
most
increase was the good Correct word choice
highest
rate
with 25% increasing from 14% to 39%. Then
, it followed
by Add a missing verb
was followed
execellent
Correct your spelling
excellent
value
with 23% from 5% to 28%.
On the other hand
, the decreasing value
consisting
of Wrong verb form
consists
satisfactory
Correct article usage
a satisfactory
rate
, poor
Correct article usage
a poor
rate
, and very poor rate
. The satisfactory rate
was the most decreasing value
with 28% decreasing from 45% to 17%. It also
followed by Add a missing verb
was also
very
poor Correct article usage
a very
rate
and poor rate
with the decreasing was 11% and 9% respectively.
Overall
, the hotel service's quality could be said having
Change the verb form
to have
increase
, where there Wrong verb form
increased
were
increasing in positive Correct subject-verb agreement
was
value
(execellent
and good Correct your spelling
excellent
rate
) and decreasing in negative value
(poor and very poor).Submitted by rlsatria on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, value with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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