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The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries.

The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries.
The given line graph depicts the information pertaining to the
number
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 of
books
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 which were rented in distinct months in 2019 across 4 different public libraries.
Overall
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, it can be observed that the quantities of borrowed
books
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 experienced an upward trend in most libraries, with the exception of Ryeslip
Library
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. It can
also
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 be noted that West Eaton and Church Mount had similar trends. Beginning with the noticeable trend, the
number
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 of
books
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 that were borrowed from Ryeslip
library
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 was the highest figure, recording exactly 300
books
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. In the next 3 years later, the
number
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 of
books
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 rapidly decreased and gained about 160
books
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. Regarding
books
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 in Sutton Wood
library
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, it slightly increased to 275
books
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 in July. After that, the
number
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 of
books
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 dramatically went down and hit its lowest point at 100
books
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.
Then
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, it sharply rose to 300
books
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at the end
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 of the timeframe. Turning to the remaining statistics, both West Easton and church mount had the same
number
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 of
books
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 borrowed at the beginning. At West Easton
Library
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, the
number
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 of
books
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 slowly climbed up to 150
books
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 in August, before
remainingat
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remaining at
remaining
aplateau
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a plateau
plateau
 from August to September. Moving to church mount, the quantities of borrowed
books
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 steadily increase from 50 to 150
books
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 in the given time frame.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, books, library with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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