The table below illustrates UK participation in selected sports by gender between 2005/06 and 2008/09. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given table displays data about the percentage of

men

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and women who took part in some selected

sports

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in the United Kingdom between 2005/06 and 2008/09.

Overall

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, women tended to participate in indoor

sports

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such

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as swimming and diving more than

men

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while

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a larger number of males joined cycling, jogging, cross-country, and road-running compared with females.

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, there were no significant changes in the number of gentlemen and ladies over the period and indoor activities were the most popular of all. Looking at indoor

sports

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, the proportion of girls taking part in

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field was usually nearly one-third higher than that of boys, 18% compared with 13.3% in 2005/06 and 16.5% compared with 13% in 2008/09.

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, the other

sports

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: cycling, jogging, or running were more popular with

men

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, 12.7% and 14.4% compared with 7% and 6.4% of women in 2005/06 and 2008/09, respectively. There were no remarkable changes in the percentages of male and female participants in all mentioned

sports

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from year to year, fluctuating from the lowest of 12.2% to the highest of 13.3% for

men

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in indoor activities over the period,

for example

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. Another noticeable point is that indoor

sports

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were the most

favored

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favoured

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overall

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, especially to ladies, with 18% in 2005/06 and 16.5% in 2008/09.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, sports with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

212 words

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