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The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two graphs illustrate the details of
crime
 types in the UK
as well as
 the connection between and the
crime
 rate from
last
 year.
Overall
, among 4 different
crime
 types, violent
crime
 placed first and the
crime
 rate peaked in the late 10s to early 20s.
Last
 year in the UK, the pie chart indicates that violent
crime
 accounts for 46% of all
crime
. It's followed by property
crime
 and drug
crime
 which accounted for 23% and 22% respectively. The other
crime
, which is a public order
crime
, makes up the remaining percentage.
On the other hand
, data on the connection between
age
 and
crime
 showed that less than 10
thousand
crime
cases
 were done by people within the youth of 12 years old. The
crime
cases
then
 peaked for people of
age
 20 with around 80
thousand
crime
cases
. It's followed by
age
 16 with 70
thousand
crime
cases
 and people
of
Change preposition
apply
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age
 24 with 60
thousand
crime
cases
. The
crime
 rate gradually decreases as the
age
 group is older.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words crime, age, thousand, cases with synonyms.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • The line graph depicts
  • The pie chart illustrates
  • reveals
  • displays
  • depicts
  • the trend of
  • the overall crime rate
  • steadily decreased
  • the distribution of
  • different types of crime
  • prevalent
  • accounts for
  • the most common crime
  • followed by
  • make up
  • a smaller proportion of
  • the total crimes
  • a smaller percentage
  • approximately
  • the remaining percentage
  • It is important to note that
  • reflects
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