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The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.

The line graph provides information about the amount of books that were borrowed in four differen months in 2914 from 4 village libraries, and the pie chart illustrates the percentage of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time.
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The line graph illustrates the
number
 of
books
 borrowed from four
libraries
 located in the villages of
West
Eaton
,
Ryeslip
, Sutton Wood, and
Church
 Mount from
June
 to September 2014.
Overall
, three
libraries
West
Eaton
, Sutton Wood, and
Church
 Mount experienced an increase in the
number
 of
books
 borrowed,
while
Ryeslip
 saw a decline. In detail, Sutton Wood had around 250
books
 borrowed in
June
.
This
number
 slightly increased to just over 250 in July,
then
 dropped sharply to 100 in August.
However
, by the end of the period, the
number
 of
books
 borrowed surged to approximately 300, making it the highest among the four
libraries
.
Similarly
, both
West
Eaton
 and
Church
 Mount started with around 50
books
 borrowed in
June
. By September, the
number
 of
books
 borrowed had tripled for both
libraries
, reaching around 150 each.
Conversely
,
Ryeslip
 experienced a significant decrease. The
number
 of
books
 borrowed dropped dramatically from over 300 in
June
 to about 150 in September. Despite
this
 decline,
Ryeslip
's figures remained higher than those of
West
Eaton
 and
Church
 Mount throughout the period.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, books, libraries, west, eaton, ryeslip, church, june with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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