The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.

The chart and graph below give information about three categories of workers in Australia and the unemployment levels within those groups.
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The pie graph gives information about the proportion of employees in
Australia
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by where they were born. The line chart illustrates the unemployment rate in three groups of people from 1993 to 2003.
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, it can be seen that native Australians account for the largest percentage. People from non-English-speaking countries(NESC) showed the highest unemployment rate over the period of ten years. Looking at the pie, it can be observed that the figure for NESC and people from English-speaking countries (ESC) was identical at 14% and 10% respectively. Workers born in
Australia
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took up the largest proportion with around
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of the pie. Turning to the unemployment rate in
Australia
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, it is evident that both three groups fell over the period of 10 years. In NESC, it started at 8%,
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to 4% in 2003. In
Australia
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and the ESC group,
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number started from 4% the decreased to 2% in 2003.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words australia with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
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