The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table data shows how much people ate and produced
potatoes
in various regions worldwide in 2006. Overall
, Europeans consumed the most potatoes
, while
Asia
and Europe were the top producers.
According to
the data, the average European ate just over 96 kilograms
of potatoes
in 2006, more than anywhere else. North Americans came in second with about 58 kilograms
per person. Even though Asia
produced the most potatoes
, the average person there ate around 26 kilograms
. In South and Central America, people consumed over 23 kilograms
each, while
Africa had the lowest potato consumption, with just over 14 kilograms
per person.
In terms of production, Asia
countries growth
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potatoes
in 2006, far more than Africa and America. Europe was the second-largest producer, with about 5 million tones
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Asia
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