The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below provide information about the consumption and production of potatoes in five parts of the world in 2006.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table data shows how much people ate and produced
potatoes
in various regions worldwide in 2006.
Overall
, Europeans consumed the most
potatoes
,
while
Asia
and Europe were the top producers.
According to
the data, the average European ate just over 96
kilograms
of
potatoes
in 2006, more than anywhere else. North Americans came in second with about 58
kilograms
per person. Even though
Asia
produced the most
potatoes
, the average person there ate around 26
kilograms
. In South and Central America, people consumed over 23
kilograms
each,
while
Africa had the lowest potato consumption, with just over 14
kilograms
per person. In terms of production,
Asia
countries
growth
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over 131 million
tones
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tonnes
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of
potatoes
in 2006, far more than Africa and America. Europe was the second-largest producer, with about 5 million
tones
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less than
Asia
. The
highlights
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that
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Asia
and Europe were the main regions for potato production that year

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