The line graph indicated the information about the number of questionnaires collected from Tourist Information office in a city based on individual, letter/email and telephone by first 6 months in 2011.

The line graph illustrates the number of 3 different kinds of questionnaires gathered ( in person- by letter/email- by

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) which enquiries by tourist information between January and June in 2011.

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, the collection of questionnaires in person and by

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increased throughout specific periods,

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by the letter decreased. In the initial stage of the period, the

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was the leading received. Eventually, the in-person became the most widely used received, overtaking both the by-

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and the

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in the final months. With regards to the number of

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in-person responses, it began at over 400 and

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dropped

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high of nearly 1800 in June.

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, about 900 responses

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were received in the first month, after which the figure fluctuated slightly before going up dramatically to 1600 in June.

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by-letter only started in January at approximately 800 ,

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figure fell slightly until May to around 400 but it stabilized in the final months to around under 400.