The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

the chart illustrates the

percetage

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percentage

of people (women and men)

with

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of

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various ages who did sport in 2010. the highest

pecentage

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percentage

of female , who

care

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cares

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about their

healthiness

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health

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,

are

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from 45 to 54

years

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old.the

while

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female more than 65

years

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old made up

lowest

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percentage

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of the graph.. and 15 to 24

years

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old males made up the highest

percetntage

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percentage

.

wheras

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whereas

males at 45 to 64

years

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old

experinced

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experienced

experience

the lowest amount.

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, it

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also

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worth mentioning from 15 to 44 the

percentage

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of men

decresed

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decreased

markedly

.but

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but

the

percentage

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of women had a

considerably

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rise. moving into the next age range from 45

years

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old the

percentage

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of males rose and women

percentage

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fell slightly.