The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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of people (women and men) Correct your spelling
percentage
with
various ages who did sport in 2010.
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percentage
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the lowest
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percentage
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the lowest amount.
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experienced
experience
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is also
percentage
of men decresed
markedly Correct your spelling
decreased
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the Correct your spelling
but
percentage
of women had a considerably
rise.
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