The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.

The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010.
The pie charts compare the proportion of British pupils in a university in the UK who were masters in other
languages
besides
English between 2000 and 2010.
Overall
, Spanish was still the most popular as its apparent proportion was still the highest in both years.
Additionally
, a 10% decrease in
portion
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of
students
who are not able to speak any other language was obviously observed between two years. After a decade, the percentage of German speakers remained constant at 10%
whereas
the segments of other
languages
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speakers climbed up. The percentage of Spanish and two other
languages
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speakers increased by 5% as same as that of another language speaker.
Conversely
, the portion of
students
who speak French and who cannot speak any other language decreased by 5% and 10%, respectively. These changes indicate the higher popularity
in
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speaking other
languages
among
the
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UK
students
except for French. Among all additional
languages
spoken by the
students
, Spanish was the most popular in both years, accounting for about one-third in 2000 and rising up in 2010.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 67%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words languages, students with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportions
  • British students
  • university
  • speaking other languages
  • language proficiency
  • overall trends
  • comparison
  • 2000
  • 2010
  • chart
  • data
  • percentage
  • significant
  • increase
  • decrease
  • noteworthy
  • comparative analysis
  • improvement
  • decline
  • conclusion
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