The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

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The chart illustrates information about how much money is earned by exporting in different fields in one country

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the table depicts the percentage change has happened in values between 2015 and 2016.

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, what stands out from the pictures is that all groups of export earnings experienced

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changes.

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, textiles represented the most

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in comparison with gems and jewellery, which dropped over the period in question. Considering the bar chart, both petroleum and agricultural products showed a minor improvement, the former increased from just over 60

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in 2015 to around 63

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in 2016 and the latter improved

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around 30

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. The same pattern can be seen for engineered goods and textiles where both soared significantly in values, 8.5 per

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and 15.24 per

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in turn which is followed by shifting from 56

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to over 60

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for engineered products and 25

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to over 30

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for textiles.

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, the only category

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falling from approximately 42

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to 40

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gems and jewellery,

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from 2015 to 2016

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shown in the table for

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field of exports.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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