The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.
The chart illustrates information about how much money is earned by exporting in different fields in one country
while
the table depicts the percentage change has happened in values between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, what stands out from the pictures is that all groups of export earnings experienced
slightly
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changes.
In addition
, textiles represented the most
increased
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in
values
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in comparison with gems and jewellery, which dropped over the period in question. Considering the bar chart, both petroleum and agricultural products showed a minor improvement, the former increased from just over 60
billion
dollar
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in 2015 to around 63
billion
dollar
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dollars
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in 2016 and the latter improved
0.81
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per
cent
at
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around 30
billion
dollar
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dollars
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. The same pattern can be seen for engineered goods and textiles where both soared significantly in values, 8.5 per
cent
and 15.24 per
cent
in turn which is followed by shifting from 56
billion
dollar
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to over 60
billion
dollar
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for engineered products and 25
billion
dollar
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to over 30
billion
dollar
for textiles.
By contrast
, the only category
experienced
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falling from approximately 42
billion
dollar
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dollars
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to 40
billion
dollar
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dollars
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is
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gems and jewellery,
that is
why
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the 5.18
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per
cent
dropped
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from 2015 to 2016
has been
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shown in the table for
this
field of exports.
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