The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian boys and girls schools pupils attending 4 different sports activities after school in 2010.

The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian boys and girls schools pupils attending 4 different sports activities after school in 2010.
The chart illustrates the proportion of Australian students of both genders joining 4 different types of sport , namely swimming ,
soccer
,
ball
, netballball and
also
the percentage of Australian pupils not attending a play in the year 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the daughter always has a higher rate on 4 kinds of business and
also
in no physical exercise, with the exception of
soccer
. Notably , the percentage of the fellow joining the
soccer
was the highest throughout the surveyed period. In 2010 , the number of percentages of daughters who participated in swimming , netball ,
ball
and no business all saw a higher proportion. The rates of Australian daughter students who joined in swimming ,
ball
and no joined play were small higher than the lad one , with exactly 16% in swimming , 7% in a
ball
and 4% in no business . But the ratio of school adolescents participating in netball was 18% which is far higher than the rate of the lad one . Looking at the bar chart in more detail , the percentage of boys who joined
soccer
in 2010 was nearly 20% which was the highest rate on the chart and
also
that figure was larger than the proportion of daughters .
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words soccer, ball with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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