The charts below show the percentageof water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. Summarise the information byselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie graph illustrates a comparison between North
America
,South America
, Europe
, Africa
, Central Asia
, and South East Asia
in water used . The data are measured in percentages.
overall
, it can be seen that using water in agriculture is the most popular compared to other uses in all countries except North America
and Europe
which
industrial use is more popular there. Correct word choice
where
Europe
and North Africa
data are approximately the same.
On the one hand, North America
uses water as much as Europe
at around 50% for industrial , about 14% for agricultural and less than 40% for industrial.with regard to South Africa
, Agriculture is the highest at around three quarter
Fix the agreement mistake
quarters
while
industrial is the lowest at just 10%.
On the other hand
, in domestic use
Southeast Add a comma
use,
Asia
and centre Asia
has
exactly the same at 7%. Correct subject-verb agreement
have
In addition
, Centre Asia
has half of southeast Asia
in industrial use at 6% , meanwhile, they have 81% and 88% respectively in agricultural. Africa
had 84% in agricultural and 7% and 9% in industrial and domestic correspondinglySubmitted by ananan2780 on
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, europe, africa, asia with synonyms.
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