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The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors- agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the contribution of three sectors- agriculture, manufacturing, and business and financial services- to the UK economy in the twentieth century. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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the bar chart depicts the data on three different elements which contributed
on
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 the
financail
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financial
 system of England from 1900 to 2000. Generally speaking, it is evident that
although
 the proportion of agriculture decreased sharply over a century, the proportion of financial services rose
drammatically
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dramatically
 at the same time.
additonally
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Additionally
, the
stastistic
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statistic
statistics
 of industry gradually
forget
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 the effect on
market
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the market
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 in 2000.
initially
, it can be seen that in 1900, the figure for agriculture stood at 50%, after which it experienced a
slghtly
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slightly
slight
 growth to above 50% in the next 50 years.
however
,
this
 was
follewed
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followed
 by a sharp decline to exactly 10% in 1975 and finished at around 2% in 2000. on the
contraty
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contrary
, in spite of the slow rise of financial
serveices
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services
 which solely
contribute
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 about 5% and went up 10% after 50 years. moving onto the remaining
stactistics
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statistics
, even though showing a mere contribution-10% in 1950, the percentage of
bussiness
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business
 rose rapidly to 20% and
reach
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 30%
in
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 the end of
period
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the period
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.
besides
, the proportion of industry
contribute
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contributed
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for
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 around 45% in 1900 and fell slowly to under 40%, 30%, and 15% in each period respectively.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slow" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contribution
  • sector
  • economy
  • twentieth century
  • trend
  • decline
  • growth
  • period
  • significant rise
  • factors
  • relative performance
  • dominant
  • comparison
  • analysis
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