the graphs show the percantage of math graduates and other graduates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia and aslo show the average salary of both these types of garduates, from 2004 to 2012

Demonstrated in the graphs are the details show the percentage of full-time workers holding a university degree, followed by the average salary of

graduates

. The units are measured in percentage and the amount of dollars. In general, the proportion of maths and other

graduates

went up and down variously which gain almost the high groups.

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stayed increasing in both categories. Looking at the initial figures, it can be noted that other

graduates

started at a smaller percentage than maths

graduates

proportion which was around 60% to 70% in 2004

while

maths

graduates

stood at 80%.

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with the unchanged figures from 2006 to 2012 in

math

graduates

which stayed around 80% to 90%,

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time when

math

graduates

reached their peak at nearly 90%, the other

graduates

increased dramatically in 2006 and 2008 which gained its highest point at nearly 80% before declining significantly until 2012. In 2012, the

math

graduates

gained the number nearly 80%. Turning to the remaining details, it can be noted that both categories had a similar aspect which had an increasing way. Starting at the same points at $41,000 in 2004, the

math

graduates

' salary changed dramatically to have the highest number at $ 56,000 in 2012

whereas

the other

graduates

showed a slight growth to reach $51,00 in 2012.