The graph below show the percentage of math graduates and other graduates who got full tie job after graduating from a university in Australia, and also show the average salary of both these types of graduates, from 2004 to 2012.
The given chart provides information on both full-time workers were held a university degree with the percentage and the number of average salaries of
graduates
in Australia between 2004 and 2012.
Overall
, it can be seen that among all the percentage of full-time workers who achieved a university degree, the scale of math graduates
witnessed an upward trend
, in contrast
, the amount of other graduates
had a downward trend
from 2004 to 2012. Of all the percentages of the two types of university degrees, math graduates
always reached the highest over 9 years, beginning from 2004.
At the general witness, the percentage of maths graduates
increased slightly and reached a peak in 2008, with around 83%, still ranking 1st. In contrast
, there was a downward trend
in the proportion of other graduates
, with above 60% in 2012 and returning back the same figure in 2004. But in 2006, other graduates
gained rank 1st and reached the peak, with ranging from 87% to 89%.
In general, the figures of the statistics show information about the number of graduates
' average salary. From 2004 to 2012, math graduates
witnessed an upward trend
and still rank 1st, while
others were decreased. There was a dramatic increase between 2004 and 2012, with 56000. It was higher than it used to be in 2004 around 15000. Finally
, other graduates
had a slight decrease over 9 years, starting from 2004, with 51000 in 2012.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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