The given bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age group who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent.

The given bar chart shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age group who did regular physical activity in 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevent.
The bar chart illustrates the comparation between Australian male and female who did constant phyisical activity in 2010.
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different of ages.
Overall
, it can clearly be seen that the women did more physical training than men in most
age
goups. The different position indicates in 15 to 24
age
goup that the male shows more active than the female. In terms of female position, it started precisely 47,7 % in 15 to 24
age
group
then
it has risen gradually just bellow 48% in 25 to 34
age
group
. The trend rise until reach the peak exactly 53,3 % in 45 to 54
age
group
and it decreased to the lowest poin 47.1 in 65 and over
group
. Regarding the male, it stood just above 50 % in early
age
group
then
decreased significantly to just below 40 % in 35 to 44
age
goup.
However
, it started to rise gradually from 43.1 % to exactly 46,7 % in respective
age
groups.
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