The graph below shows food consumption in Australia between 1950 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
the graph
illustrate
the amount of food (kg per person) , which was eaten by Change the verb form
illustrates
Australian
over a period of 60 years from 1950 to 2010.
Fix the agreement mistake
Australians
it is clear that
vegetables and fruit were consumed the most . moreover
, 4 nutrients had some fluctuations , while
seafood remained steady .
in further
detal
, from 1950 to 1970 Correct your spelling
detail
vegetable
, fruit and meat saw a Fix the agreement mistake
vegetables
slightly
Change the adverb
slight
decreases
, Fix the agreement mistake
decrease
while
consumption of the
bread Correct article usage
apply
increase
considerably from 4o to almost 60. Wrong verb form
increased
moreover
, between 1970 to 1990 bread s sell
fell fromReplace the word
sales
near
60 to Change the word
nearly
approximetly
50 , Correct your spelling
approximately
whereas
the other factors except seafood fluctauated
.
moving into the next 40 years ( from 1990 to 2010) vegetables and fruit rose dramatically to peak of 160 and 140 respectively , which is the highest amount for them over the shown period. Correct your spelling
fluctuated
by contrast
, meat decreased from near
120 to 80 . Change the word
nearly
furthermore
, bread after some fluctuation , increased markedly to 60.Submitted by yasaman.bozorgzad9 on
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreases" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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