The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar graph illustrates the proportion of
men
, women, and
children
that consumed five servings of fruit and vegetables each day in 8
years
in England from 2001 to 2008. Over the whole time period, the percentage of women was higher than that of
men
’s or
children
’s
year
by
year
. Another pattern emerged for
men
and
children
, which
initially
showed a static nature for three
years
from 2001 to 2003
then
it increased before it slightly decreased. Every
year
since 2001, the proportion of females eating fruits and vegetables was greater than males’ or
children
’s.
For instance
, in 2001 it was 9% higher than kids’ and 5% more than
men
’s.
Likewise
, in 2008 it was 7% higher than
children
’s and 4% larger than
males’
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.
This
pattern of women’s percentage being higher than any other group persists for every
year
during the
years
2001-2008. 2001, 2002, and 2003 was a period of stability for
children
and
men
. The amount with 12% of
children
and 17% of
men
remained unchanged during these three
years
.
On the other hand
, from 2004 to 2007, the proportion of kids and males increased. In 2004, 18% of
children
increased to 20% for 2005. From 2005, it grew to 24% in 2006. From there, it rose to 27%. The same pattern occurred for
men
with a greater number of percentages during these
years
. In 2007-2008, proportions for both groups decreased slightly by 2% for kids and by 1% for males.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, children, years, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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