The chart below shows the percentage of people who ate five portions of fruit and vegetables per day in the UK from 2001 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the proportion of
men
, women, and children
that consumed five servings of fruit and vegetables each day in 8 years
in England from 2001 to 2008.
Over the whole time period, the percentage of women was higher than that of men
’s or children
’s year
by year
. Another pattern emerged for men
and children
, which initially
showed a static nature for three years
from 2001 to 2003 then
it increased before it slightly decreased.
Every year
since 2001, the proportion of females eating fruits and vegetables was greater than males’ or children
’s. For instance
, in 2001 it was 9% higher than kids’ and 5% more than men
’s. Likewise
, in 2008 it was 7% higher than children
’s and 4% larger than males’
. Correct your spelling
males
This
pattern of women’s percentage being higher than any other group persists for every year
during the years
2001-2008.
2001, 2002, and 2003 was a period of stability for children
and men
. The amount with 12% of children
and 17% of men
remained unchanged during these three years
. On the other hand
, from 2004 to 2007, the proportion of kids and males increased. In 2004, 18% of children
increased to 20% for 2005. From 2005, it grew to 24% in 2006. From there, it rose to 27%. The same pattern occurred for men
with a greater number of percentages during these years
. In 2007-2008, proportions for both groups decreased slightly by 2% for kids and by 1% for males.Submitted by marichkhobadze133 on
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