The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The graphic shows two maps,

one

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for Bunborough in the present day and

one

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showing planned changes to the

village

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in the year 2024. At present Bunborough is a small fishing

village

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with shops and houses next to the fishing port. The

village

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is connected to

Maychester

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Manchester

and Lynwich by

road

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. We can see that there are big changes planned for the

village

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over the next

years

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few years

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Firstly

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the

village

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will no longer have a fishing port and

instead

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a promenade will be built in its place.

Also

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, you will be able to drive to the beach from the town and

this

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road

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will

be continue

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continue

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to the main

road

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In addition

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this

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new

road

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there will be a

trainline

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train line

built to

further

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connect the town and some houses will be demolished to the train station.

Finally

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, two hotels will be built,

one

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by the beach and a

further

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one

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by the promenade.

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, the town will become more

dependant

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dependent

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on tourism than fishing with easier access to the beach and hotels

been

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being

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built. The

village

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will

also

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better have connections with a

trainline

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train line

and

road

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extension.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, further".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words one, village, road with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
3
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

188 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Anticipation
Significant
Conversion
Commercial activities
Expansion
Enhancing
Bypassing
Congestion
Connectivity
Recreational area
Demolition
Infrastructure
Preservation
Public transportation hub
Encourage

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The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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