The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphic shows two maps,
one
for Bunborough in the present day and one
showing planned changes to the village
in the year 2024. At present Bunborough is a small fishing village
with shops and houses next to the fishing port. The village
is connected to Maychester
and Lynwich by Correct your spelling
Manchester
road
. We can see that there are big changes planned for the village
over the next years
.
Correct quantifier usage
few years
Firstly
the village
will no longer have a fishing port and instead
a promenade will be built in its place. Also
, you will be able to drive to the beach from the town and this
road
will be continue
to the main Change the verb form
continue
road
. In addition
to this
new road
there will be a trainline
built to Correct your spelling
train line
further
connect the town and some houses will be demolished to the train station. Finally
, two hotels will be built, one
by the beach and a further
one
by the promenade.
Overall
, the town will become more dependant
on tourism than fishing with easier access to the beach and hotels Replace the word
dependent
been
built. The Wrong verb form
being
village
will also
better have connections with a trainline
and Correct your spelling
train line
road
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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