The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the village of Bunborough in the present day and plans for the village in 2024.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The graphic shows two maps,
one
for Bunborough in the present day and
one
showing planned changes to the
village
in the year 2024. At present Bunborough is a small fishing
village
with shops and houses next to the fishing port. The
village
is connected to
Maychester
Correct your spelling
Manchester
and Lynwich by
road
. We can see that there are big changes planned for the
village
over the next
years
Correct quantifier usage
few years
show examples
.
Firstly
the
village
will no longer have a fishing port and
instead
a promenade will be built in its place.
Also
, you will be able to drive to the beach from the town and
this
road
will
be continue
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continue
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to the main
road
.
In addition
to
this
new
road
there will be a
trainline
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train line
built to
further
connect the town and some houses will be demolished to the train station.
Finally
, two hotels will be built,
one
by the beach and a
further
one
by the promenade.
Overall
, the town will become more
dependant
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dependent
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on tourism than fishing with easier access to the beach and hotels
been
Wrong verb form
being
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built. The
village
will
also
better have connections with a
trainline
Correct your spelling
train line
and
road
extension.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, further".
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words one, village, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Anticipation
  • Significant
  • Conversion
  • Commercial activities
  • Expansion
  • Enhancing
  • Bypassing
  • Congestion
  • Connectivity
  • Recreational area
  • Demolition
  • Infrastructure
  • Preservation
  • Public transportation hub
  • Encourage
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