The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts compare information about the number of graduate and postgraduate English students who did not go into full-time jobs after finishing university in 2008.
Overall
, most pupils preferred following their studies instead
of working, yet small
group of students chose voluntary Add an article
a small
work
.
According to
the UK graduates diagram, the
large group of pupils like to improve their knowledge, for we can see Correct article usage
a
further
study had 29665 persons. In addition
, Part-time work
, Unemployment, and Voluntary work
had 17735, 16235, and 3500 persons respectively. Also
, Part-time work
was famous like Unemployment so that
the difference was roughly 1000.
As can be seen in the United Kingdom postgraduate graph, not only the Correct word choice
apply
graduates
diagram but Change to a genitive case
graduate's
graduates'
also
the postgraduate graph had the same trend with various figures. Further
study was the main reason that students did not have full-time work
, and had 2725; furthermore
, part-time work
had second level with 2535, but 200 less than full-time work
then
, Unemployment and Voluntary work
had third and fourth situations.Submitted by maryamkazemi968 on
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