The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
The pie chart illustrates the average
percentage
of the family budget to be spent on Use synonyms
restaurant
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meals
from 1970 to 2000. The line graph depicts the differences between Use synonyms
meals
consumed in Use synonyms
restaurants
. When considered together, there is no correlation between the two sets of data.
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Firstly
,in 1970, the pie chart showed that only 10% of families spent their Linking Words
food
budget Use synonyms
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meals
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whereas
, 90% of them preferred to allocate the budget for home-cooking Linking Words
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However
, after 10 years, there was a slight increase at around 5% for the category of Linking Words
the
families buying Correct article usage
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meals
outside. Use synonyms
Lastly
, the average Linking Words
percentage
of both Use synonyms
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meals
and home-cooking Use synonyms
food
ended at an equal Use synonyms
percentage
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at
50% in 2000.
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In contrast
, the trend of meal selling in Linking Words
restaurants
showed a contrasting fact. In 1970, both fast Use synonyms
food
and sit-down Use synonyms
restaurants
sold Use synonyms
meals
with an initial number starting off at 20 Use synonyms
meals
per year. Use synonyms
Then
, sit-down Linking Words
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meals
had a quite significant increase, reaching 30 Use synonyms
meals
per year in 1980, before it continued to rise to 40 and 45 in 1990 and 2000. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, fast Linking Words
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meals
had experienced a dramatic increase as the figure of Use synonyms
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sold reached 80 Use synonyms
meals
in 20 years.
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To conclude
, home cooking was always Linking Words
more
preferable Correct quantifier usage
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than
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to
restaurant
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meals
even though the result of the consumption finished at the same Use synonyms
percentage
. Meanwhile, the line graphs showed that fast Use synonyms
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had a higher number of Use synonyms
meals
sold compared to sit-down Use synonyms
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meals
in 40 years, even so, Use synonyms
this
fact showed that there was no correlation between the preference and the number of Linking Words
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food
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