The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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This
figure illustrates the top ten nations creating and using electricity in 2014.
Overall
, China and the USA are the first and the second countries producing and consuming this
energy, While
Korea is the lowest country among these nations. The production
in all countries is more than their consumption
except Germany.
It can be seen that China with 5,398 billion
kWh
in production
and 5,322 billion
kWh
in consumption
has the highest rank in the table. The second rank is the USA with 4,099 billion
kWh
production
and 3,866 billion
kWh
consumption
. Germany with 582.5 billion
kWh
in consumption
is more than 526.6 billion
kWh
in production
.
On the flip side, Korea is placed in 10th rank with 485.1 billion
kWh
production
and 449.5 billion
kWh
consumption
. By looking more into details, the gap between the value of the production
and the consumption
in Russia is so small with 1,057 and 1,038 respectively.Submitted by brightstargalaxy on
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