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The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world

The chart below shows the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world
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What has been depicted in the pie graphs is what proportion of
water
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 usage is used for three purposes in six countries around the world.
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, the percentage of
water
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 used for agriculture ranks first among the given countries, except for
Europe
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 and North
America
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. Industry consumes more
water
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 than other sectors in
Europe
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 and North
America
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. Agricultural
water
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 use stands first in Central and Southeast Asia, and Africa, which is more than two-thirds of the total, followed closely by South
America
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 which is just a bit over 70%. The share of agricultural
water
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 consumption in North
America
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 is marginally higher than that of
Europe
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 at 39% and 32%, respectively. South
America
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 accounts for the largest per of domestic use (19
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),
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 there is a significant difference between the figure for
Europe
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 and North
America
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 on the one hand, and Africa
on the other hand
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 (15, 13, and 9, respectively).
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 approximately half of
water
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 is consumed for industrial usage in North
America
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 and
Europe
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, South
America
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’s proportion is twice that of Central Asia. There is
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 no noticeable disparity between the percentage of industrial use in Africa and Central Asia
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Vocabulary: Replace the words water, europe, america with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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