In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

Regarding the growth of technology, the payment systems are

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being updated .The imperative role of credit cards in

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so inevitable that it seems to gradually supersede the

cash

in the future entirely.

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essay will shed light on some of

obviously

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recognized reasons behind

this

trend, yet the populations that may not consent to the change. First and probably the most, payments either on phone applications or by physical cards ,

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will alleviate some financial security and frauds that are happening constantly with paper

money

.

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, In my country ,Iran,the risk of pickpocketing and robbery will inexorably drop

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a significant level if using

cash

no longer be carried in wallets .As a

results

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, shops would probably avoid accepting

cash

in order to protect their businesses better.

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digital currencies occupy less in the wallets in comparison with

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cash

, so logically I can see that future generations will be considering

this

point as well.

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, it should not be neglected that some communities namely the elderly, perhaps would not consent to utilize digital

money

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It would be even of greater concern for them to learn the gadgets which are exposing more inconvenience and stress to them rather than taking care of their physical

money

. Having said that , tourists from developing countries may not be able to possess

an international cards

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, so they are obliged to change their currencies in exchange offices and hold the

cash

until the end of their trip ,

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not accepting

cash

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shops and hotels will challenge the tourists

as well as

the related industries.

To conclude

the ideas that have been thoroughly discussed, I reckon that in the

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years

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people will have to ultimately pay their expenses

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credits card

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credit cards

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and gadgets because

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corporations and shops

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refuse to take responsibility

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taking

cash

and the

money

stays only as some digits in the devices and banks.

However

, I assume some populations of the society namely the elderly

as well as

the tourists, will not consent to

this

idea .