The charts below show the percentage of male and female workers in country A and country B. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie graphs illustrate the proportion of
workers
' gender, which includes service, agriculture, and industry, in country
A and country
B
.
Overall
, in country
A, most male and female workers
choose to be employed in service, occupying 56% and 49% respectively in male and female workers
, similarly
, in country
B
, service practitioners occupied a great fraction of workers
, which includes 65% of male workers
and 88% of female workers
. In country
A, there are 29% of male workers
are farmers, and there are even 14% more female farmers than males, however
, obviously, country
B
is not an agricultural country
, there are very small portion of workers
are agricultural practitioners, which only contains 3% of male and 1% of female farmers. Country
A has 15% of the male industrial population, which is almost twice the portion of the female industrial population, which is 8%. Similarly
, in country
B
, a fraction of male practitioners in industrial
is almost a third of the portion of females, which is 33% and 11%.Replace the word
industry
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