The pie chart below shows bottled water consumption in various regions as a percent of global consumption and bar chart shows the growth of bottled water consumption in 2001. Summarize the information and compare where relevant

The pie chart below shows bottled water consumption in various regions as a percent of global consumption and bar chart shows the growth of bottled water consumption in 2001.

Summarize the information and compare where relevant
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The pie chart below demonstrates the amount of bottled
water
utilization in eight countries as a
percent
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per cent
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of the world consumption in 1999 and the bar chart indicates the growth of bottled
water
consumption in 2001
Overall
, Western Europe accounted for the largest bottled
water
consumption with the slowest increasing rate,
while
the number of bottled
water
made up the least but it reached the highest point in growth rate. In 1999, there was the biggest amount of bottled
water
used in Western Europe, at 48%. These figures in Australia, New Zealand and Latin America were 15%, 13%,
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and 10
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% respectively. Asia and the USA contributed the smallest number of packaged
water
at only 2%.
According to
the bar chart, Asia had the fastest growth of bottled
water
which took up 14%. It made up a bigger share around 2% than the rate of New Zealand and Latin
American
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America
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. The Middle East and Africa had the same percentage at nearly 10%. Western Europe’s figure took up the remaining 2%.
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