The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban India in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban India in 2013, 2015 and 2017.
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The bar chart provides information about the educational status of people living in both underdeveloped
areas
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and cities in India between 2013 and 2017.
Overall
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, citizens' level of education increased over the given period,
although
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, folks living in more developed
areas
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were more educated than their rural counterparts, meanwhile, more
men
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in both rural and urban
areas
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were educated than the females. In the less developed
areas
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, in 2013, 57.87% of
men
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were learned
while
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females in the same
year
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just above 50% compared to
males
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male
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folks. By 2015, the
percentage
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of both
men
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and women had risen,
although
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women rose more. By 2017, the
percentage
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of
men
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had risen to 77.15%
while
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females had risen to 57.93%.
However
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, in the urban region, in 2013, the
percentage
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of educated women was 64.05%
while
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men
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were
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17.04% higher in the same
year
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, the
percentage
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increased
year
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in and
year
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out and by 2017,
men
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had
rose up
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slightly by 7.67%
whereas
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, their female counterpart had increased to 72.86% and 79.11% in 2015 and 2017 respectively.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "although, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words areas, men, year, percentage with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
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