The line graph shows the percentage of different age groups of cinema visitors in a particular country from 1978 to 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line graph depicts the proportion of cinema attendance sorted by their ageing sections in a specific nation over a 30-
year
period.
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, it can be seen that teenagers were the most visitors generally, Linking Words
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the lowest rate belonged to the elderly ones. In 2008, the oldest people and individuals who were between 35 to 49 years old reached an equal number.
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teenagers stood at %90, which is the highest rate of Linking Words
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, followed by their youngster counterparts, their middle-aged rivals and the oldest ones with %80, %60 and %40 respectively. The over-50-Use synonyms
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-old participants hit the low of %40 Use synonyms
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In the following years, all ageing groups experienced a significant decline until the next decade, which ended at the Use synonyms
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similarly
, all of these trends saw a sharp increase in the following 10 years and reached the rate of %90, %70, just over %60 and %40 by sorting from the youngest to the oldest. Linking Words
Finally
, in 2008, teenage counterparts were attended the most by %80. Linking Words
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, both the oldest rivals and middle-aged persons had the lowest proportion in Linking Words
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