People have different views on how to reduce traffic congestion. Some think that governments should build more train and subway lines, while others think that building more roads and widening existing roads will reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

People

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have differing opinions about how to solve

traffic

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jam

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. Some say that the solution to jammed

traffic

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is

by increasing

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the routes of public

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transportations

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,

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others view that it is better for

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to build new

roads

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and widen existing

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.

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essay agrees that the problem of congesting

traffic

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can be tackled by making mass transportation

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reachable across more areas. Raising the number of train and subway lines will enable the mass

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transportations

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to reach more citizens. As more

people

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would be accommodated,

less

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people

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would be using the

roads

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and

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opt in for the mass

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transportations

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, when the routes they headed for existed. It is

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agreed that investing in more transportation lines would lessen

traffic

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jam

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.

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, Singapore's government notes that

traffic

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in central Singapore

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reduced by 10% since the opening of

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Singapore's

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Singapore

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subway lines.

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, some

people

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think that constructing more

roads

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and enlarging existing

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is a better solution that more

roads

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can accommodate more vehicles. Nowadays, the ownership of personal vehicles keeps increasing in major cities and it must be balanced with the

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of

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roads

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construction and capacity.

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, it is still difficult to avoid

traffic

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jams, since even the largest personal vehicles would still not be able to take up as many

people

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as public

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transportations

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would.

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, in general, large cars can accommodate a maximum of 6

people

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,

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a single carrier

of

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train has a maximum capacity of 50

people

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. In conclusion,

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both solutions can play a role in reducing

traffic

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congestion, equipping public

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transportations

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with new routes would work better in resolving

traffic

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problems, acknowledging that

train

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trains

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and

subway

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can fit a way larger number of

people

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in

its

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carriages.