The chart below illustrates the proportion of change in the share of global students amid university graduates in different Canadian states among 2001 and 2006.
The chart above compares the percentage of international students among
the
college graduates in various Canadian Correct article usage
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states
in the year
2001 and 2006. Fix the agreement mistake
years
Overall
, it shows that over the two time periods, all of the states
mentioned faced an increase of
global students graduating from their colleges.
Among the Change preposition
in
states
that achieved more than 10% global
graduates in 2006 are New Brunswick, Nova Scotia, and British Columbia. Previously in 2001, New Brunswick and Nova ScotiaChange preposition
of global
,
attained the first and the highest percentages respectively, both at a little over 5%, and still Remove the comma
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maintaned
their positions in 2006. Correct your spelling
maintained
On the other hand
, British Columbia saw the most significant increase in the group, begun
with a little under 5% in 2001 that rose to a little over 10% in 2006.
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beginning
While
the other states
, from the highest to the lowest percentages respectively, Quebec, Alberta, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, and Ontario all achieved above 5%, with Quebec almost reaching 10%. It can be highlighted that Quebec, which previously in 2001 was in the third position, lost its position to British Columbia in 2006.Submitted by annzhr on
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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