The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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sales
, of coffee and bananas in the years 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
to begin
with , coffee sales
in Switzerland were 3 million
in 1999. That number increased by double in the year 2004 to 6 million
. Denmark had an increase of a percentage of less than 1% in 1999. The number of sales
was 1.8 million
that number increased to 2 million
. The UK showed a significant jump in terms of coffee sales
with 1.5 million
in 1999 to 20 million
and 2004. Showed an increase in all countries, except Denmark and Sweden . Switzerland with the highest sales
of bananas in 1999 and 2004 with an increase of more than double from 50 million
in 1999 to 47 million
in 2004. Furthermore
, Belgium was .6 and 4 million
in 1999 and 2004 respectively. Sweden and Denmark decrease a decrease in both countries
Some of the bananas in both 1999 and 2004 by a big margin.Submitted by malogeil51 on
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