The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled coffee in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table
,
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demonstrates information about
sales
, of coffee and bananas in the years 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
to begin
with , coffee
sales
in Switzerland were 3
million
in 1999. That number increased by double in the year 2004 to 6
million
. Denmark had an increase of a percentage of less than 1% in 1999. The number of
sales
was 1.8
million
that number increased to 2
million
. The UK showed a significant jump in terms of coffee
sales
with 1.5
million
in 1999 to 20
million
and 2004. Showed an increase in all countries, except Denmark and Sweden . Switzerland with the highest
sales
of bananas in 1999 and 2004 with an increase of more than double from 50
million
in 1999 to 47
million
in 2004.
Furthermore
, Belgium was .6 and 4
million
in 1999 and 2004 respectively. Sweden and Denmark decrease a decrease in both countries Some of the bananas in both 1999 and 2004 by a big margin.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • consumption patterns
  • sustainable agriculture
  • ethically sourced
  • market demand
  • statistical trends
  • sales figures
  • incremental growth
  • market share
  • consumer awareness
  • corporate responsibility
  • socially conscious consumerism
  • benchmarking
  • sales trajectory
  • quantitative comparison
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