The bar chart shows the percentage of Australian boys and girls schools pupils attending 4 different sports activities after school in 2010.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of Australian

girls

boys

who played soccer, swimming, netball, and

basketball

after school in 2010.

Overall

it is clear that

girls

tend to be more active than

boys

in swimming, netball,

basketball

and

also

no sports,

while

football was the most interesting activity for males.

In addition

basketball

was seen as having slight differences in the number of participants for both genders. In 2010, football was the most preferred physical exercise for

boys

, with 20% of them choosing

this

sport, compared to 4%.

In contrast

, female students were more interested than male students in playing netball, with 18% and 2%, respectively. About swimming, Australian

girls

were more attracted to swimming than

boys

, with a gap of 2%.

Similarly

boys

were not as many as

girls

in choosing no sports, with 2% and 4% consecutively.

However

, around 7% of

girls

consider playing

basketball

more than 6% of

boys

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