The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The illustration portrays the step-by-step process
at
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which the electricity is created in a hydroelectric power station.
Overall
, it is evident that
water
flows from and to the high-level
reservoir
throughout the day.
First,
the river
water
is stored
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high-level
reservoir
by a dam during the night and it is released in the day.
Then
, the released supply of
water
flows through the tubes that connect the
turbines
and dam, the flow
is lead
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to the
turbines
. The
turbines
spin manufacturing current with the help of the generator, and the
water
is sent to the low-level
reservoir
. After that, the current is passed to the power grid and
then
to the national grid.
However
,
in
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the
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night, the process is reversed, in which the
water
from
low-level
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the low-level
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reservoir
is pumped upwards by the
turbines
. The
turbines
direct the
water
from
bottom
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to the high-level
reservoir
, in which it is stored
from
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the next day’s electricity production.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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