The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The illustration portrays the step-by-step process
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which the electricity is created in a hydroelectric power station.
Overall
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, it is evident that
water
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flows from and to the high-level
reservoir
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throughout the day.
First,
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the river
water
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is stored
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high-level
reservoir
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by a dam during the night and it is released in the day.
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, the released supply of
water
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flows through the tubes that connect the
turbines
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and dam, the flow
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to the
turbines
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. The
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spin manufacturing current with the help of the generator, and the
water
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is sent to the low-level
reservoir
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. After that, the current is passed to the power grid and
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to the national grid.
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,
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the
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night, the process is reversed, in which the
water
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from
low-level
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the low-level
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reservoir
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is pumped upwards by the
turbines
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. The
turbines
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direct the
water
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from
bottom
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to the high-level
reservoir
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, in which it is stored
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the next day’s electricity production.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words water, reservoir, turbines with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 0 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the first paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • hydroelectric power station
  • reservoir
  • potential energy
  • mechanical energy
  • electrical energy
  • turbine
  • generator
  • renewable energy
  • fossil fuels
  • emissions
  • power lines
  • gate-controlled tunnels
  • gravity-driven
  • transformation
  • clean energy source
  • sustainable
  • recycled water
  • mountainous area
  • activate
  • transmit
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