The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevent.

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The line graph gives information about forest

manufacturer

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manufacturing

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products

such

timber

pulp

and

paper

Correct the article-noun agreement

apply

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European nations, between 1980 to 2000. Looking from an

overall

Correct your spelling

perspective

perpectives

Correct your spelling

perspective

it is clear that

paper

and

pulp

products increased year by year

while

at that time

timber

flactuated

Correct your spelling

fluctuated

fluctuate

To begin

with that, in 1980

paper

produced 4

million

tonnes

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of products

show examples

products

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of products

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timber

and

pulp

with

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apply

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5 and 6

million

tonnes

. Next 5 years

paper

grew up to 6,

whereas

timber

boomed to 10

million

tonnes

Pulp

droped under 3 in 1983, but jumped to 7 millon

tonnes

in 1985. After

Correct article usage

a decade

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decade

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a decade

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paper

manufacturing

rised

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rose

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to 9

million

pulp

increase

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increases

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a little more

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than 8

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than 8

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million

, but

timber

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goes

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down

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by approximately

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approximately

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by approximately

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million

tonnes

. In 2000,

paper

Wrong verb form

went

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up to 12

million

and stayed at the top of the list,

timber

varyed

Correct your spelling

varied

and

take

Wrong verb form

took

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probably 8

million

, and

pulp

rocket

Wrong verb form

rocketed

show examples

to almost 10

million

tonnes

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Vocabulary: Replace the words timber, pulp, paper, million, tonnes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.

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Vocabulary: The word "go down" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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6Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
5Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
21Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

151 words

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Suitable writing tone

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