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The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevent.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevent.
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The line graph gives information about forest
manufacturer
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manufacturing
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 products
such
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 as
timber
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,
pulp
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 and
paper
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 in
a
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apply
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European nations, between 1980 to 2000. Looking from an
overall
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perspective
perpectives
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perspective
,
it is clear that
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paper
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 and
pulp
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 products increased year by year
while
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 at that time
timber
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flactuated
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fluctuated
fluctuate
.
To begin
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 with that, in 1980
paper
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 produced 4
million
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tonnes
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of products
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products
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of products
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,
timber
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 and
pulp
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 with
a
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apply
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5 and 6
million
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tonnes
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. Next 5 years
paper
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 grew up to 6,
whereas
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timber
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 boomed to 10
million
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tonnes
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.
Pulp
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 droped under 3 in 1983, but jumped to 7 millon
tonnes
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 in 1985. After
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a decade
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decade
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a decade
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paper
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 manufacturing
rised
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rose
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 to 9
million
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,
pulp
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increase
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increases
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 a little more
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than 8
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8
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than 8
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million
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, but
timber
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go
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goes
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 down
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by approximately
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approximately
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by approximately
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 7
million
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tonnes
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. In 2000,
paper
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go
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went
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 up to 12
million
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 and stayed at the top of the list,
timber
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varyed
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varied
 and
take
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took
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 probably 8
million
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, and
pulp
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rocket
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rocketed
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 to almost 10
million
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tonnes
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words timber, pulp, paper, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "go down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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