The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevent.
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The line graph gives information about forest
manufacturer
products Replace the word
manufacturing
such
as timber
, pulp
and paper
in a
European nations, between 1980 to 2000.
Looking from an Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
overall
Correct your spelling
perspective
perpectives
, Correct your spelling
perspective
it is clear that
paper
and pulp
products increased year by year while
at that time timber
flactuated
.
Correct your spelling
fluctuated
fluctuate
To begin
with that, in 1980 paper
produced 4 million
tonnes
Change preposition
of products
products
, Change preposition
of products
timber
and pulp
with a
5 and 6 Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
million
tonnes
. Next 5 years paper
grew up to 6, whereas
timber
boomed to 10 million
tonnes
. Pulp
droped under 3 in 1983, but jumped to 7 millon tonnes
in 1985. After Correct article usage
a decade
decade
Correct article usage
a decade
paper
manufacturing rised
to 9 Correct your spelling
rose
million
, pulp
increase
a little moreChange the verb form
increases
Change preposition
than 8
8
Change preposition
than 8
million
, but timber
go
down Change the verb form
goes
Change preposition
by approximately
approximately
7 Change preposition
by approximately
million
tonnes
. In 2000, paper
go
up to 12 Wrong verb form
went
million
and stayed at the top of the list, timber
varyed
and Correct your spelling
varied
take
probably 8 Wrong verb form
took
million
, and pulp
rocket
to almost 10 Wrong verb form
rocketed
million
tonnes
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words timber, pulp, paper, million, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "go down" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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