The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevent.

The graph below shows the production of three forest industry products in a European country, namely timber, pulp, and paper, from 1980 to 2000.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make Icomparison where relevent.
The line graph gives information about forest
manufacturer
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manufacturing
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products
such
as
timber
,
pulp
and
paper
in
a
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European nations, between 1980 to 2000. Looking from an
overall
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perspective
perpectives
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perspective
,
it is clear that
paper
and
pulp
products increased year by year
while
at that time
timber
flactuated
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fluctuated
fluctuate
.
To begin
with that, in 1980
paper
produced 4
million
tonnes
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of products
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products
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of products
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,
timber
and
pulp
with
a
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5 and 6
million
tonnes
. Next 5 years
paper
grew up to 6,
whereas
timber
boomed to 10
million
tonnes
.
Pulp
droped under 3 in 1983, but jumped to 7 millon
tonnes
in 1985. After
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a decade
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decade
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a decade
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paper
manufacturing
rised
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rose
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to 9
million
,
pulp
increase
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increases
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a little more
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than 8
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8
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than 8
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million
, but
timber
go
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goes
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down
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by approximately
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approximately
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by approximately
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7
million
tonnes
. In 2000,
paper
go
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went
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up to 12
million
and stayed at the top of the list,
timber
varyed
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varied
and
take
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took
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probably 8
million
, and
pulp
rocket
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rocketed
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to almost 10
million
tonnes
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words timber, pulp, paper, million, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "go down" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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