The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.

The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.
The proportion of
sodium
, saturated fat, and added
sugar
contained in three American daily meals
along with
snacks
is
demnstrated
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demonstrated
by the pie charts. It is
also
notable that the excessive intake of the aforementioned nutrients can be a potential risk to one's well-being.
Overall
, whilst
dinner
can be ranked the first as an unhealthy meal, containing a high mix of
sodium
and saturated fat, breakfast is the healthiest with a
minimmun
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minimal
percentage of the studied nutrients.
Additionally
,
snacks
, regarding the amount of added
sugar
they
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, can put
its
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consumers' health in danger. An in-depth examination of the the two potentially unhealthy meals,
dinner
and lunch, reveals that they both consist
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high percentage of
sodium
, 43% and 29% respectively which ,in sum, accounts for over 70% of an American's average daily
sodium
intake. Considering saturated fat,
likewise
, lunch and
dinner
, together, account for 63% of its daily consumption rate. Regarding added
sugar
,
however
,
dinner
and lunch demonstrate a lower share of 23% and 19% each. Turning to breakfast and
snacks
, it can be vividly seen that breakfast holds an almost stable share of about 15% of the total intake of each nutrient.
This
,
however
, is in stark contrast to
snacks
that despite showing a relatively healthy figure for
sodium
and saturated fat 14% and 21% respectively, accounted for a significantly high share of added
sugar
(42%).
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