The chart below shows the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison when relevant.

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The proportion of

sodium

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, saturated fat, and added

sugar

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contained in three American daily meals

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snacks

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demnstrated

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demonstrated

by the pie charts. It is

also

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notable that the excessive intake of the aforementioned nutrients can be a potential risk to one's well-being.

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, whilst

dinner

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can be ranked the first as an unhealthy meal, containing a high mix of

sodium

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and saturated fat, breakfast is the healthiest with a

minimmun

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minimal

percentage of the studied nutrients.

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snacks

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, regarding the amount of added

sugar

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they

posses

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, can put

its

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apply

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consumers' health in danger. An in-depth examination of the the two potentially unhealthy meals,

dinner

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and lunch, reveals that they both consist

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of a

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high percentage of

sodium

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, 43% and 29% respectively which ,in sum, accounts for over 70% of an American's average daily

sodium

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intake. Considering saturated fat,

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, lunch and

dinner

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, together, account for 63% of its daily consumption rate. Regarding added

sugar

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however

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dinner

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and lunch demonstrate a lower share of 23% and 19% each. Turning to breakfast and

snacks

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, it can be vividly seen that breakfast holds an almost stable share of about 15% of the total intake of each nutrient.

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however

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, is in stark contrast to

snacks

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that despite showing a relatively healthy figure for

sodium

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and saturated fat 14% and 21% respectively, accounted for a significantly high share of added

sugar

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(42%).

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

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