The bar chart illustrates the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories: local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles (all calls), from 1995 to 2002.

The bar chart illustrates the total number of minutes (in billions) of telephone calls in the UK, divided into three categories: local - fixed line, national and international - fixed line, and mobiles (all calls), from 1995 to 2002.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
The chart below the peaks, the whole number of minutes in billions of phone calls in the UK categorized into three types from 1995 to 2002.
Overall
, the chart includes three different types of calls, including local-fixed
lines
, national and international-fix
lines
, and mobiles. Whilst local-fix
lines
owned the majority share during the period, mobiles had the minimum portion. The chart exhibits local-fixed
lines
had the highest division over the years. it steadily increased from approximately 70
billion
minutes to its peak of 90
billion
in 9092 and
then
experienced a gradual downtrend to around 70 in 2002.
Additionally
, national and international-fixed
lines
moderately rose from slightly 40
billion
to over 60 in 2002, its highest number.
whereas
mobile call share was Less than 5
billion
in 1995, it reached above 20
billion
regularly in 1992 and dramatically rose to approximately 45 in 2002, which was the greatest growth ratio
Submitted by ali.homayoni93 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Introduction: The introduction is missing.
Introduction: Change the first sentence in the introduction.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
Vocabulary: Replace the words lines, billion with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: