The chart bellow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart bellow shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart illustrates a comparison between the
exports
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earnings in five categories from 2015 to 2016.
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, it shows a table which depicts
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proportion rates for each category in the same period studied.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the incomes related to exportations were the highest in oil products and engineered artefacts,
while
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textile and agricultural products were the lowest.
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, the biggest
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in values was for
textiles
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the textiles
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category. As we can see in the bar chart, it is notable that the vast majority of exportation incomes were for the categories of petroleum and engineered articles at roughly $60 billion in 2016.
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, garments and agricultural outcomes were the shortest at approximately $30 billion in 2016. Looking with more detail in the table depicted, textiles faced the greatest rate of figure increment between 2015 to 2006.
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the lowest shifting proportion was for Agricultural products at 0.81%.
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,
earning
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in exportations for Gems and jewellery showed a decrease
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5.18% in the same time studied.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Exports
  • Categories
  • Percentage change
  • Trend
  • Growth
  • Decline
  • Comparative analysis
  • Fluctuations
  • Overall performance
  • Sector
  • Year-on-year comparison
  • Trade figures
  • Economic indicator
  • Market dynamics
  • Infographics interpretation
  • Statistical representation
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