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You are going to move out of your apartment in a English-speaking country. Your landlord is a very good person, who has assisted you a lot during your stay. Meanwhile, your friend would like to rent the flat after you. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter, •Let your landlord know that you will be leaving •Thank you landlord for his/her help •Tel him/her about your friend

#move #apartment #country #landlord #person #friend #rent #•let #•thank #•tel
Dear Ms. Julie, I am writing
this
 letter to inform you that my training course in London will be completed in 3 months later.
Therefore
, I am going to leave
this
 beautiful city,
as well as
to
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apply
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say
good bye
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goodbye
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 to you. I would love to show my appreciation for your support during 1 year
staying
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of staying
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 in your
cozy
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cosy
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 apartment. I
would
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will
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 never forget the lovely garden view from the balcony where I have spent a lot of time
for
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apply
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studying.Honestly, you are the nicest landlord I have ever met. By the way, I would like to recommend you a new renter, a friend of mine, her name is Mary, she is
few
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a few
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year
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years
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 younger than me,
major
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majoring
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 in art studying. She does not like keeping pets and has a tiny habit. If you have not had any other
plan
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plans
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 for your apartment, please let me connect Mary to you.
Finally
, thank
again
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you again
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 for all you have done for me. Best wishes for you and your family. Best regards, Cassy
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task achievement
While the main points of the task have been addressed, providing additional details, such as an exact moving date or any transition plans, might improve the completeness of the response.
coherence cohesion
Ensure grammatical accuracy and avoid small typographical errors to improve clarity.
task achievement
The letter maintains a polite and appreciative tone, suitable for the context of informing a landlord.
coherence cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical, with a clear introduction, body, and conclusion.
coherence cohesion
Each paragraph deals with a single idea, making it easier to follow the writer's main points.
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