The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
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The table shows
five
European countries are spending on Correct article usage
the five
entertaiment
, clothing, housing, food and drink the amount of monthly Correct your spelling
entertainment
familly
income.
Correct your spelling
family
Overall
, it can be seen thas
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that
of
Housing is the highest compared to other items. Meanwhile, Clothing is the lowest than other proportion.
Look at Change preposition
apply
details
, Starting the one Correct article usage
the details
bigger
which is housing Correct word choice
most
at
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in
UK
at 37 per Correct article usage
the UK
cent
followed by Germany at 33 per cent
then
france
at 31 per Change the capitalization
France
cent
. The last
one is Turkey and spain
under 21 per Change the capitalization
Spain
cent
. Moreover
, Food and drink is
the second Change the verb form
are
bigger
which is Turkey at 36 per Correct word choice
biggest
cent
followed by Spain
at 21 per cent
then
Correct word choice
and then
UK
Correct article usage
the UK
27
. The Change preposition
at 27
last
one France
and Germany are under s6
per Correct your spelling
6
cent
.
Regarding the lowest is Entertaiment
began Correct your spelling
Entertainment
france
at 13 per Change the capitalization
France
cent
followed by Germany 19
Change preposition
at 19
percent
. After that, Change the spelling
per cent
UK
, Turkey and Correct article usage
the UK
Spain
are under 12 per cent
. Additionally
the next item, Clothing Add a comma
Additionally,
France
and Spain
are the lowest compared to other item
on Clothing.Change the wording
another item
other items
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