The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainment. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.
The table shows
five
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the five
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European countries are spending on
entertaiment
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entertainment
, clothing, housing, food and drink the amount of monthly
familly
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family
income.
Overall
, it can be seen
thas
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that
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of
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apply
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Housing is the highest compared to other items. Meanwhile, Clothing is the lowest than other proportion. Look at
details
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the details
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, Starting the one
bigger
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most
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which is housing
at
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in
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UK
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the UK
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at 37 per
cent
followed by Germany at 33 per
cent
then
france
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France
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at 31 per
cent
. The
last
one is Turkey and
spain
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Spain
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under 21 per
cent
.
Moreover
, Food and drink
is
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are
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the second
bigger
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biggest
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which is Turkey at 36 per
cent
followed by
Spain
at 21 per
cent
then
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and then
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UK
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the UK
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27
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at 27
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. The
last
one
France
and Germany are under
s6
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6
per
cent
. Regarding the lowest is
Entertaiment
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Entertainment
began
france
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France
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at 13 per
cent
followed by Germany
19
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at 19
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percent
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per cent
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. After that,
UK
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the UK
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, Turkey and
Spain
are under 12 per
cent
.
Additionally
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Additionally,
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the next item, Clothing
France
and
Spain
are the lowest compared to
other item
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another item
other items
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on Clothing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent, france, spain with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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