The chart belowngiving information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The chart belowngiving information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

42% of people in the 36-50 age group gave to charity in 1990 and

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fell to 35% in 2010.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

20 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

charitable donations
age range/bracket/group
percentage (%)
20-year period
British people
trends
increase/decrease
significant change
donation patterns
remained stable
highest/lowest
observe
compare
summarize
comment on
relevant features

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The chart belowngiving information on the percentage of British people giving money to charity by age range for the years 1990 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems. Write a letter to be copied to all neighbours that share the parking area. In that letter • explaining the problems • suggesting ways to help the situation • proposing a possible meeting

Some people believe that after a child enters school their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people believe that the only purpose of a zoo is entertainment. Do you agree or disagree?

Living in a country where you have to speak a foriegn language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.

Nowadays many people go shopping in their free time. Shopping has replaced many other activities that people used to choose as their hobby. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?