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The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates the amount of earnings from export of one country in 5 different categories within a period of 2 years, commencing from 2015
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 the table shows the rate of changing
value
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 export in one country in 2016.
Overall
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, The highest rate of export earnings can be seen for Petroleum
products
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 and Engineered goods in 2016 and the opposite can be observed for
Textiles
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 in 2015. the earnings from exporting in 2016 for all categories were significantly greater than those of 2015. surprisingly, the highest rate of changing
value
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 can be found for
Textiles
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 in 2016 and
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 figure decreased significantly for Agricultural
products
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. At the beginning of the period, Petroleum
products
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 were recorded at 60 and over 62 billion dollars in 2015 and 2016,respectively and these numbers were similar for Engineered goods in the same years. the lowest
value
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 of exporting was recorded for
Textiles
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 in 2015, at over 25 ,
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 number nearly halved compared with Engineered goods in the same year.
Textiles
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 had the most increase in changing
value
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 in 2016 compared to the other categories. Agricultural
products
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 were the lowest one in the table, at 0.81%.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products, textiles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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