You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The given bar chart illustrates the amount of earnings from export of one country in 5 different categories within a period of 2 years, commencing from 2015
while
the table shows the rate of changing value
export in one country in 2016.
Overall
, The highest rate of export earnings can be seen for Petroleum products
and Engineered goods in 2016 and the opposite can be observed for Textiles
in 2015. the earnings from exporting in 2016 for all categories were significantly greater than those of 2015. surprisingly, the highest rate of changing value
can be found for Textiles
in 2016 and this
figure decreased significantly for Agricultural products
.
At the beginning of the period, Petroleum products
were recorded at 60 and over 62 billion dollars in 2015 and 2016,respectively and these numbers were similar for Engineered goods in the same years.
the lowest value
of exporting was recorded for Textiles
in 2015, at over 25 , this
number nearly halved compared with Engineered goods in the same year.
Textiles
had the most increase in changing value
in 2016 compared to the other categories. Agricultural products
were the lowest one in the table, at 0.81%.Submitted by salehmiri1995 on
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words value, products, textiles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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