Write a letter to a local NGO (charity organization) and ask how you can join that organization. In your letter: •Introduce yourself •Why do you want to join the organization •How will your services help the society?
Dear Sir,
I am Jack.
Last
week I, migrated to the new Linking Words
resident
which Replace the word
residence
are
situated near to your charity Change the verb form
is
organization
office. Use synonyms
Also
, my acquaintances told Linking Words
Correct pronoun usage
me about
about
your charity Correct word choice
that
organization
is working well and Use synonyms
to help
a lot of Change the verb form
helps
people
who are Use synonyms
staying
below the poverty line.
Verb problem
living
Moreover
, I Linking Words
am
a social service student when was studying in Wrong verb form
was
the
college. During our leisure Correct article usage
apply
times
Fix the agreement mistake
time
I
Correct pronoun usage
apply
and
my college mates Correct word choice
apply
were
Verb problem
and I
done
Wrong verb form
did
a
various social acts like cleaning the streets and Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
delivery
Replace the word
delivering
the
free food to some Correct article usage
apply
orphanage
. Fix the agreement mistake
orphanages
Also
, arranged a free campaign to discuss about a keep clean environment. Linking Words
Thus
, I want to join Linking Words
in
your Change preposition
apply
organization
as a member.
Eventually, social service is one of the best Use synonyms
act
among the Fix the agreement mistake
acts
people
. As a citizen of Use synonyms
this
country, I would like to help others. My social service and dedication will reach Linking Words
to
the Change preposition
apply
people
who are suffering Use synonyms
by
Change preposition
from
the
poverty. So, kindly consider my request and allow me to join Correct article usage
apply
in
your charity Change preposition
apply
organization
for the Use synonyms
developing
of poor Replace the word
development
Use synonyms
people
basic amenities.
Regards
Jack Robert.Change noun form
people's
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task achievement
You could improve clarity by avoiding repetition and unnecessary information, such as mentioning you've migrated to a new residence, as it is not directly relevant to your interest in joining the NGO.
coherence cohesion
Enhance your logical structure by clearly separating each main point into distinct paragraphs. This will make your letter easier to follow and more organized.
task achievement
Using personal experiences and examples (like your previous social service activities) adds depth to your reasons for wanting to join the NGO.
coherence cohesion
Your letter has a polite and respectful tone, which is suitable for formal communication.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite