The charts below show information on free-time activities taken by teenagers in a specific country both in 2009 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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information on free-time activities taken by teenagers in a specific country in 2009 and 2019Change the verb form
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