The graphs below give information about computer ownership as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. (20 mins.)

The graphs below give information about

computer

ownership

as a percentage of the population between 2002 and 2010, and by level of education for the years 2002 and 2010,

It is clear that

postgraduates are the highest in the

ownership

of a

computer

from all other degrees. First of all, the percentage of

computer

ownership

from 2002-2010

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increased dramatically as shown in the graph,

In addition

, in the year 2010 the rate of owning a

computer

is

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approximately 76% which is the highest,

Whereas

the rate of owning a

computer

in 2002 is the least with about 55%.

Furthermore

, people with no high school diploma are the least

in owning

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a

computer

,

whereas

postgraduates are the

highest

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in owning

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to own

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a personal

computer

significantly,

Nonetheless

,the percentage

High

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of High

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school graduates that own a

computer

between 2002 and 2010

had

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doubled . In conclusion, the probability of

computer

ownership

is increasing

one

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from one

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year to another

as a result

of the essentialness of computers in our lives.