The tables show (Table a) the average speed of urban zone traffic (in kilometres per hour or kph) in a number of countries over a fifty-year period, including a future estimate; and also (Table b) the total number of urban zones per country (in thousands). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables show (Table a) the average speed of urban zone traffic (in kilometres per hour or kph) in a number of countries over a fifty-year period, including a future estimate; and also (Table b) the total number of urban zones per country (in thousands).

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
A table chart indicates how fast was the urban zone traffic in terms of
kilometers
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per hour in two decades periods between 1970 and 2020 for a few countries. The other graph depicts the number of urban fields in thousands for the starting and ending
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of the given range of time.
Overall
, Italian and
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traffic have both sped up through the years, which have 32 and 51
kph
in 1970 rose to a peak of 58 and 61
kph
.
Whereas
, France, the USA, Brazil, Russia, Canada and Chile had fluctuated over the course of
this
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50 years, with
estimated
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an estimated
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average
speed
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of 60, 50, 54, 64, 68, 68,
50
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and 50
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kph
, respectively. the UK traffic speed rate was mostly plateaued with an average of 55
kph
, exceptionally it slowed down in the
last
2 decades by almost 10 units. Regarding the second chart,
it is clear that
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size of urban
area
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areas
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of
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France, the USA, Brazil, the UK, Spain, Canada and Chile almost quadrupled.
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Russia
,
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fell half by size.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average speed
  • urban zone
  • kilometres per hour (kph)
  • fifty-year period
  • future estimate
  • significant increase/decrease
  • compare and contrast
  • highest/lowest average speeds
  • relationship
  • correlate
  • future projections
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • anomalies
  • outliers
  • overall trend
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