The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000 Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The charts below show the percentages of men and women aged 60-64 in employment in four countries in 1970 and 2000

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The graph illustrates the proportion of male and female workers between 60 to 64 ages in Australia
,
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and
Japan
. USA, and
Belgium
between 1970 and 2000.
Overall
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employment rates from four different countries were higher than women followed respectively by
Japan
, the USA, Australia, and
Belgium
. As a matter of fact,
Japan
experienced the highest number of workers reaching a peak in 1970 compared to other countries.
However
, the
trend
declined by 76
percent
to 84
percent
from 1970 to 2000.
Conversely
, the same
trend
also
happened in three different countries.
Belgium
faced statistically a downtrend from 79
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to 19
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and remained the highest decline
trend
among the others. In comparison with the female ratio,
Japan
still has the highest employment rates among the others.
However
, the
trend
increased gradually occurred only in the USA and Australia.
In addition
, the lowest rates of employment percentages with less than 10
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were experienced by
Belgium
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan, belgium, trend, percent with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "declined" was used 2 times.
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