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The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.

The charts below show the percentage of workers in three sectors across four countries in 1980 and 2010.
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The bar charts illustrate the proportion of
the
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workers in three majors across four nations in 1980 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen that the portion of all nations’ industry increased except
China
,
while
 the proportion of industry and
services
 increased in two periods in 1980 and 2010.
In addition
,
China
 has a higher
percentage
 of agriculture than other nations. In 1980,
China
 accounted for the
most
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percentage
 of agriculture, approximately 70%,
while
USA
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,
Germany
 and
Japan
around
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 10%.
In contrast
,
China
was
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 the lowest portion of industry, around 40%, and
Germany
was
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 the highest
percentage
, 60%.
Usa
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USA
 and
Japan
 were similar, 51% and 49%, respectively. The
services
 of four nations including the
USA
,
China
,
Germany
 and
Japan
 were lower than 50% and the lowest
percentage
 was
Japan
. In three more decades,
China
 still accounted for the highest ranking
of
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 agriculture, 50%, and The
USA
,
Germany
,
Japan
 contributed to lower than one in tenth, 1%, 3% and 7%, respectively. The
services
 of
Germany
, The
USA
, and
Japan
 decreased,
while
 that of
China
 did not change. The
services
 of
Germany
 still ranked the top one, 40%, and the
USA
,
Japan
 and
China
 decreased to nearly 39%, 30% and 22%, in that order.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words china, services, percentage, usa, germany, japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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