The chart below shows the percentage of respondents expressing an interest in certain sports.
The Barchart compares the interests of people on six different types of sport in the 1995, 2000 and 2005
years
.
Overall
, while
the percentage
of people who have
interested in football showed the highest results, Verb problem
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golf showed the lowest Correct article usage
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rate
.
To begin
with football, which recruited approximately 45% in 2005, while
in the 1995 and 2000 years
it was lower for 3 or 4%. Swimming
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The swimming
percentage
was only 22% in 1995, however
in 2000 it reached almost 30%, and then
in 2005 it also
decreased to nearly 26%. Regarding rugby, in 1995, people
who Correct article usage
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were interested
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in
this
kind of sport was
around 25%, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
although
it decreased to almost 15% in 2000, but
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it again increased to 27% in 2005. Snooker's rate
in 1995 was exactly 30%, which is much more
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years
, where the percentage
were 22 and 24%. Tennis reached to
almost 30% in 1995, Change preposition
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although
in the 2000 and 2005 years
, the rate
was relatively similar, 23%.
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golf, where in 1995 the Add a comma
Finally,
percentage
was around 16, which is higher than in 2005, where it was 15%. And in 2000, was the lowest rate
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